other way
December 7, 2010 by elisabethbee
knocking my head against
the wall
pounding ‘till i don’t feel it
anymore
why don’t i turn the other
way
round
no wall
on a curved surface
space/time is not flat
why do my thoughts get
written in script
lies
so close to the plane of a page
when i want to reach though
the surface
break though
more suitable atmosphere
feeling myself in all dimensions
moving my body to breathe
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quick edit: do you mean reach through, break through?
Do our thoughts, when we write them on the white plane, or when we beat our heads on the plane of space-time, do they have a gravity, do they leave an impression on the plane, does light band around them?
Thanks for reading into the work. Yes, I think about reaching through, breaking through into a space of clearer understanding – not unlike breaking through surface tension of water… and to the second comment – so much to think about isn’t there? Thanks again,
EB
Ann